The new 'uncle' at home

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I peeped into the living room, shyly, as Ma called out to me.
'Come, Minu, tell Uncle hi...'
I bashfully crept up and hid behind my mom, tugging at her saree pallu. I peeked out from behind her and smiled at the man who was a new uncle at home.
I had never seen this man before, in my 6 years of life.
He took out a box of colour pencils from his bag and stretched his hand toward me. 'These are for you, Minakshi,' he said and handed them to me.
I took the box - it had 24 colours! I then mumbled thanks, still suspicious of this new relative. Who was he? Why had I never seen him before?

'Colour something and show uncle,' said Ma. I wondered why she was referring to him as 'uncle' and not 'mama' or 'chitappa'.
I nodded and went to my room and tore a page from my school drawing note, and then remembering I would later have to ask Ma to stitch the pages together (again) as the pages were coming apart because I'd torn a page.
I drew a butterfly, what I was an expert in drawing. A big one. Bright, beautiful wings. I used each of the 24 colours in the pack.
I ran out into the living room where 'uncle' was. I showed him the picture.

'Beautiful!', he cried in appreciation. I looked at Ma. She smiled approvingly.
'Oh, Lakshmi,' he said, ' I need to make an ISD call, where can I make one?'
'The booth is at the end of the 3rd street from here,' said Ma. She then noticed the confusion in uncle's eyes.
'Maybe Minu can take you?'
'Of course. Will you, Minu?'
I looked at Ma, wondering how she could let me go with this stranger, 3 streets away from home. She nodded, as if reading my mind, telling me 'It is safe. Go with him.'
I couldn't believe my ears. She was letting me go with some stranger! What if he kidnapped me, or worse still, wanted to hurt me?
I had not much choice now. I ran to the door, and shyly called 'Uncle!'

He got up and came with me. I took him to the shop where I waited inside the booth and watched the little fan getting stuck and working again, while he spoke on the phone. Whenever the fan got stuck, I used a cone made of a flyer in the booth and twirled the fan around, and it would work again.
He was done. We walked out of the booth, and he paid the bill. Then, noticing me wistfully looking at the jar of toffees and candies, he asked if I wanted a Dairy Milk.
'No!' I vehemently answered, worried about the consequences at home. (Ma would scold me for eating it without offering Somu, my elder brother, still at school)
'Sure?' he asked. I nodded.

He then went over to the counter and spoke to the man with brown teeth there.
And as I looked, 'uncle' got a cigarette and lit in a box with a switch nearby. He drew in, and a ring of smoke came tumbling out. I immediately choked, and coughed. I pinched my nose to block out the smell.
He held out his hand. 'Let's go.'

I looked at him. He held out his left hand, still smoking with the cigarette in the other.
I just turned and ran with all my strength.
'Minu, Minu, wait!!' I could hear him yelling.
Overcome with fear, I ran even faster. This man was out there to kill me. I ran until I reached home and hid in the safety of my mother's arms, while she wondered why I was panting, and where 'uncle' had gone.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

first to comment!
n abt the post..:)

Unknown said...

nice one, funny! and yeah u got a better template!

Asha said...

I guess Minu is just being careful. Good for her.

Short and simple, I liked it.

Your imaginary skills are good.

ps: Have a blessed New year, Vani.

Anonymous said...

lotsa conclusions that you can draw from this story .... the childish innocence and naivety of meenakshi and the inherent fear of strangers seem to be the two main focal points of the story .... almost reads like a r.k. narynan story right down to the wry ending (best compliment ever ... *grins*) ..... i think the uncle character could have been more fleshed out ..... other than tat, a great improvement over ur other stories ....

Hamsini said...

Erm,I don't think I quite get it. Is the "uncle" finally good or bad???:O

Anonymous said...

happy 2007 ....... hope the fireworks were great .... *wink*

Vani Viswanathan said...

bhargavi,
thanks for the first comment! :)

mahesh,
thanks :) i love the template!

Vani Viswanathan said...

asha,
Thanks! :)
Wish you a happy and prosperous New Year! :)

dante,
>>>>best compliment ever
God, thanks!!! :)
Happy New Year! The fireworks were good! :)

Hamsini,
Haha.. that doesn't really matter, the child doesn't think he's good, because he's new, and second, he ends up smoking! :)

Kausikram Krishnasayee said...

mislead .........i expected some kind of an adoption plot ...was expecting menu to leave home for good or something ...rats ...anyway good story telling :)

Thenraj said...

Nice one..buddy,

Its the child's fear..that bugged u a lot at that age.

Sandhya Ramachandran said...

ROTFL!!!

SOOOOOOOOOOOO true!!! I would have done the same!!! Or maybe lectured him on 'ill-effects of smoking' considering watta bossy talkative kid I was!!! :P

Lovely! :)

Vani Viswanathan said...

kausikram,
menu? LOL! she's 5 yrs old.. that's expecting too much of a twist!!

thenraj,
thanks :) but i hope you do realise it's fiction?

sandhya,
thanks, dear... lecture on ill effects of smoking? yup, can expect that from ya!