And that's what happened...

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Long one....brace yourself.
Read part-2 here.
He groaned. Women and their own niceties. Women and their silly way of putting things across. All he could do was give a glare back.
She smiled within. All he can do is to glare. She picked up her stuff and got ready to leave.
“Wait,” he said, and ran behind her. “Yeah.. you know what? I hate ABBA. I wonder how any silly person on earth could listen to their songs at this point of time. And to think I had to hunt around for a t-shirt with their pic just to think of vaguely impressing you! And yeah, I know you saw me dumping that damned thing in the bin… which crazy loon would go around campus wearing a tee with a silly old band’s picture. For a girl like you who thinks she’s really clever, it’s definitely not worth this much trouble. Wonder why I took your number at all. I’ve hardly seen anyone as conceited as you! And to think I wanted to ask you out….shit!!”
“Oh, really? Bloody, then why the hell should you have my number….some guy faking interests to impress girls has my number! That is totally disgusting to even think of!” she said. She snatched his phone from his hand and deleted her number.
“Oh yeah? You thought you could just erase off your number? It’s in here, woman, in here,” he said, pointing to his head.
And just then, he realised an I-don’t-care would have been more appropriate.
She laughed. “What an absolute loony! I’m really glad you don’t want to ask me out anymore! ”
And she turned to walk off.
“Hey!” he yelled. “Know that I’m a million times gladder!!”


They didn’t really meet many times after that, even accidentally. Any occasion when they happened to be close around, at least one walked away in a huff.
Almost a year later, as she was in the queue in a food stall, she saw him in one of the tables with some girl. Some pretty girl, flirting with ease.
“What a natural flirt,” she thought and smiled. Strangely, looking at him didn’t make her all that irritated as it used to till about two months back, before the long, summer vacation. She was in fact, amused to see him behave in an absolutely charming way with the girl, who, she could see, was also responding appropriately.
She turned to face the food stall and ordered, “Fried rice, to go.”
As she made her way out of the queue, she saw him standing in the queue. The pretty girl was still at the table.
And he saw her too, and after a moment, flashed a smile.
“Hi,” she said.
“Hi,” he replied, and scratched his stubble thoughtfully for a moment. “Uhh, long time!”
“Yeah!” she said. “And I see you haven’t changed your ways that much….”she continued, turning her gaze to the pretty girl.
He gave a nervous laugh. “Old habits die hard!”
She giggled. “God, you’re such a flirt!”
“Hey, if that’s a compliment, I’m happy…it’s coming from you, the most conceited girl I’ve ever seen!” he said.
She raised her right eyebrow and shot a glare.
“C’mon…just kidding!”
“Yeah, fine, you better be!” she said. “Got a class. Bye!”
“Hey, hold on…I was just wondering, yeah…you know… if we could catch up sometime and go for dinner… with Vandana, of course…oh that’s Vandana, by the way…” he said, pointing to the pretty girl he was flirting with.
“Yeah, maybe….”
“And…. your number?”
“Don’t you have it here?” she said, pointing to her head.
“Err…I still do. Just making sure it hasn’t changed.”
“No, it hasn’t. Bye, then!”


Almost two years after they met in the canteen, she still can’t believe how things had changed. He had somehow grown to be her closest friend, and she, his confidante. Vandana, he had told her, was the fourth attempt he had made after her, and unlike any of his previous tries, it was clicking quite well.
Leaning at the parapet wall of her new apartment, both were staring out at the beautiful setting sky.
“Hey, you know…” she said, still staring upwards at the sky. “ A guy can never be best friends with a girl he finds attractive….this comes in a movie...”and turned to face him.
He looked at her too.
“Yeah, ‘When Harry met Sally’….but yeah, who said I found you attractive?”
She glared at him, and returned to staring back at the sky, while he quietly laughed.


Yippppeeee! Concluded – before any of you give me more suggestions and ask questions!

25 comments:

Anu said...

:|..what a strange relationship, but I should agree, certain relationships progress even with the presence of some inadequacies!! (btw, why do you have to explicitly say that you have ended the story?)

Vani Viswanathan said...

anu,
well, yeah...strange one it is, but what exactly is the inadequacy... am not able to get it clearly...
and yeah, i had to explicitly say it's concluded because otherwise some people may just not realise that it is over!

Priya Arun said...

2 things:

1) Ending was very good. Expect pannave illai! Liked it :-)

2) Lesa 'Hum Tum' story madhiri ille? ;-) Initial fighting, then not meeting for so long...

You're right - if you hadn't said its over, I would have expected a continuation.

Somehow, oru kalyanam photo le 'subam'-nnu podlenna padam finish aana feelings illai!

Asha said...

I think it's way cool. And beautiful of cos.

More to come?

Ramya Shankar said...

Vani, glad you didn't make it all mushy mushy. Phew! Now tell me is attempting romantic fiction easy?? :-|

Aravind said...

total-a unexpected twist.... epdiyo...kaettaa nee fiction nu thaan solla pora.. so naan kekkala... naane purinjikkaren :D

Ananya S P said...

Good ending Vani !

Priya: I am sure you know this. "HUm Tum" is the hindi version of "When Harry met Sally" :)

relationships are strange indeed !

Ranajay said...

Haha...that went at quite a fast pace! Not bad :)
"Nafrat hi pyaar ki pehli seedhi hai" :P

neighbour said...

Vani, kandeepa chance unduma unaku kavalai paadathaaa...

kadhai nalla irukum... idhai padichutu namma Titanic director James copyrightukaagha otha kaalula nikarraru.. please konjam consider pannumaaa

Anonymous said...

Tamil padathula oru pattula 90% story finish pannura mathiri.. seekiram mudichutiyea :( am :-e


Very good , nice , superb mega serial.. sorry romantic fiction ;)

Vani Viswanathan said...

priya,
thanks :)
But me never seen hum tum. ;)

the woman,
well, actually i'm not all that pleased with the way things are going...so guess i'll not attempt anything of this sort on my blog anymore! :)

Vani Viswanathan said...

ramya,
Sigh.... even if i write another one, i'm not gonna post in on my blog!!!

aravind,
hehee...good, you saved yourself some trouble! ;)

Vani Viswanathan said...

anusha,
Thanks! :)
But I thought the two don't come together in hum tum like in 'when harry...'?

pyromaniac,
ugh...letting it drag longer was the last thing i wanted to do! :(
and hey, [of course, assuming my translation of that hindi line is right ;) ], where is pyaar in this story?

Jagan said...

ask questions ? ...seri yaru antha payan ? yaru antha ponnu ?

Subramanian Ramachandran said...

vani... have posted a new story at blog site... please do visit... first attempt at a serious genre... :)

i havent yet read your one .. will do

Harish said...

“Don’t you have it here?” she said, pointing to her head.

I was itching to say "I can't have it in there.. that's ur head!"

damn! Chandler's influenced me a bit too much :(

Kausikram Krishnasayee said...

now thtz a good ending...some relationships are strange ...and thats what makes those relationships special......kalaku second twist in the story, but a super one, write a book and i will deffly buy your original ....instead of the road corner pirate ;)

Vani Viswanathan said...

harish,
Over influence, purinja seri!

mark,
Yayy! Another person who's willing to buy my book ;)

Vani Viswanathan said...

jagan,
:)

rsubras,
sure thing, will read it soon! :)

Ranajay said...

Ofcourse there's love in the story. It's the kind of love two friends would share. Or so it seems.

S m i t h a said...

:) :D :) loved the ending.
and please dont say you wont blog anymore of this sort.. you dont want to give me a heartattack, do you?

Anonymous said...

wow!! good good..ending nalla irunduchu ..:)

Vani Viswanathan said...

Pyromaniac,
Ahhh... that love... hmm... but is there something else that i miss with the 'so it seems'? :P

smitha,
Uhh, this itself was really tough to churn out, me being a typical i-hate-mushy-things being! besides, you must get the right mood, isn't it? ;)
And it's ages since I read what happened to Swati and Sathya too...poi pakuren...

fun2fun,
Hey! Thanks :)

Vani Viswanathan said...

karthick,
thanks, man!

Sathish said...

:) ...... :)