Strangers in a lift

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She stood in the lift lobby managing, with great difficulty, a huge folder, 3 books she had just borrowed from the university library, her backpack which she feared would tear open any minute with all the things she’d stuffed inside, and music. Her iPod was the only thing that held her calm in this situation; without it, she would’ve dropped the books down in anger and flung the folder across. (!)

The lift seemed to be taking so long to come from just seven floors above.
He came to the lift lobby soon, slightly panting, out of breath. She cast him a customary glance and turned her head the other way.
One of the earbuds of her iPod fell down, exposing the ABBA song that was going on in full blast. As though the mysterious power that had held her together all that time was gone, she dropped the folder, and while bending to pick it up, two books.
Flustered, she threw the other book down too, so she could organise everything back to balance once again.

He bent to help her get the books too – he couldn’t just stand there while someone was struggling with a huge load. As he kneeled next to her, he could hear the song from her one-down earphone.
“ABBA…” he said, and smiled.
She nodded, giving him a quizzical look. Cautious woman that she was, she wondered why on earth he was telling her that.

“I really love their songs…and this one, tops my list…” he continued. She continued looking, nonplussed, shooting a “So?” with her expression.
He received the message perfectly. He straightened himself up and gave her the folder that he’d picked up.
“Thanks,” she said.

The lift finally came. Embarrassed that he was, for nothing at all, he went in first. And she saw, with surprise, a picture of the ABBA singers in his t-shirt’s back. She clearly hadn’t expected a t-shirt with this old band’s picture, now. She got into the lift, and smiled at him. He must be a huge fan of ABBA.
“Actually,” she said, trying hard to undo the rude image of herself she thought she’d conveyed to him. “This is my favourite song, too….sorta never fails to cheer me up, you know..”
It was his turn to be surprised.
“Which floor?” he asked.
“5,” she replied.

As people went in and out of the lift, making the ride longer, he introduced himself to her. Out of courtesy (and she was ashamed to admit, a bit of making-it-up) she introduced herself to him too.
“Storey 5” the voice in the lift. She looked at her watch. She was seventeen minutes late for her lecture. She quickly got out.
“Nice meeting you, bye,” she told him.
“Same here…bye,” he told her, and watched her start walking.
He stood for a moment, wondering what to do. He ran up to her.

“Hey, well, I…. don’t mean to sound silly, umm no, indecent? Not really…” he said, completely aware he was making a fool of himself there.
“Yeah?” she asked.
“Umm, could I have your number? We could just meet up sometime, just like that.. maybe have dinner outside or something…I know you’ll be missing home food too…”

Wow, so much to ask for a number, she thought. She gave it to him and smiled.
“Don’t call, just message me, anytime after 8 evening….”
He nodded stupidly, as though noting down a teacher’s instructions for submitting an assignment.
“Am really late for class now, bye..” she said and hurried off.
He nodded again, late though. He had been busy waltzing around in his mind.

P.S.: My first attempt at romance. No asking if it’s a true experience, blah blah. I really won’t answer those, ok? :)
P.P.S.: The title is from the book “Shantaram”, from a phrase I really loved.

19 comments:

Kausikram Krishnasayee said...

shantaram padichiya, lucky you, i wanted to buy the book, but it was too hard on my pocket, on the other hand, if u ask my advice take him out for dinner and empty his pockets....so much for the nice boys helping women in distress

Priya Arun said...

Nice! :-)

You said you won't answer the questions I had in mind, so.. great story dudette, go right ahead and write the next one (maybe a sequel to this one!) ;-)

Harish said...

happa! finally got a reason now..

"Your first romantic story! Treaat!" :D

neighbour said...

ayooo pavvoom!!!.. Singapore makkalae oru payan ippadi aliayaa pooran parthutu summa irukeengalaa..

If possible I will help him out on the way to India...

Ananya S P said...

Good One ! Now that you have said that its not a personal experience, I believe you. Is this an account of your friend's experience? That way, it would sound very convincing :) Ha! Ha !

Anonymous said...

Reminds me of my teen years, when a guy who saw me for the first time, handed over his number to me... he said, "Hi, wanna get to know you so if you're interested then call me." How cool is that. I don't quite like it when guys ask for number from ladies... I prefer they give theirs. More appropriate it seems, at least to me.

Story's a nice one though... to be continued?

Aravind said...

Unnoda experience illa-na nee illai-nu sollalaame... aana, just won't answer questions nu thaane solra...
hmmmmmmm. engaiyo idikkudhe!! :)

Nice "story", BTW

Anonymous said...

I read many of these kinds of stories. All the heroes in stories are flirting and doing some stupidity.
Hmm... yaaravathu, ego irukkura , rosham ulla hero irukkura story yezhuthungappa.

Anyway nice one :)

Vani Viswanathan said...

mark,
hehehe...
>>>take him out for dinner and empty his pockets
adha nee solli daan therinjukanumaa?!

priya,
a sequel? let's see...

Vani Viswanathan said...

harish,
wait, wait....i'll get a reason to ask you for a treat... hey, how about 600 scraps or something? :P

neighbour,
avana india-ku anupchu enna punniyam? anga innum nariya paithiyakaaranga irupangale!

Vani Viswanathan said...

anusha,
*shakes her head unbelievingly* more questions?!?!
thanks, and hey, welcome! :)

thewoman,
no...guys generally won't wanna give their numbers coz they're scared the girl won't call back! :P
and about continuing, let's see...

Vani Viswanathan said...

arvind,
engayo idikkuda?
yebbbaa....kadavule, enna kaapathu! enna sonnalum ipdi bejaar panreengale ellarum!! hmph!

lok,
>>>yaaravathu, ego irukkura , rosham ulla hero irukkura story yezhuthungappa
edha nadakkara madiri pesungalen! ;)
ennavo, sollardelam sollitu 'nice one' veraya?! :D
anyway, thanks! ;)

S m i t h a said...

way to go! but where the romance that u r talkig abt? :P :P just kidding
so r we to expect a part 2?

Vivhyd said...

hey nice attempt.. well it was a nice read. seems very much a possible situation.. I like ABBA too.. but dont think I wud find a girl in an elevator with the same like :)

Anu said...

hey, that was interestingly paced! :)..enna ma, romance stories ellam ezhudha aramichurukkey? :D

Bijesh said...

ahhh, so u won't answer questions about fact/fiction, huh? hmmm...

Kausikram Krishnasayee said...

hey apadi plan panina ....then idea mani mark isuakuk ooru invite amupu .....next seconde planela gudichi vandu seraren ....

Vani Viswanathan said...

s m i t h a,
unga level-ku ellam romance engalaala ezhuda mudiyadhu pa! ;)

vivhyd,
hey, thanks! :)

Vani Viswanathan said...

anu,
adipaavi, neeyuma! :(

biju,
no-oh, i'm not gonna! bored of those questions!! :|

mark,
aaga! major-a plan ella podara...iru, she-ya kaettu solren! ;)