Before anything, dearest Pisa girl, Happy Happy Birthday!!!!! May you have a blast today!
See part 1 here.
Meanwhile, she was smiling to herself too. He kinda looked cute, too. His class was the other way, he’d said. And he also would be 18 minutes late for his lecture, now. She was just a few paces away from the lift. He could still be there. She turned.
He was standing at the little café in the same floor. Surprisingly, he didn’t seem to be in the hurry he was in when she was leaving. He stood there, coolly sipping cold coffee.
And just as she was about to turn back and leave, she saw him give a looking disgustedly at his shirt.
“Ugh,” he exclaimed.
Just as she was looking, he removed the ABBA shirt to reveal a white, new FCUK shirt beneath. And grunting with disgust again, he took a last look at the ABBA picture before dumping it into the nearest trash bin.
Her jaw dropped down in horror. She saw him muttering to himself and she could now make out that it was something like what-more-should-I-do-to-get-a-number.
Her mind was filling with anger, and she knew it would explode unless she got out of the place, as soon as possible.
Suddenly the place around her seemed to be as crowded as ever, though it was just her mind that was clouded and irritated. And in her haste, she dropped her three books and folder again.
“Oh my God,” she groaned loudly.
As a few passers-by stopped by to see what had happened, he turned to look too. She shot him a venomous glance and continued picking them up. He ran up to her and tried to pick up the things.
“Hey, is everything fine…here, have…” she grabbed the book from his hand even before he could finish the sentence, and glared angrily at his shirt.
Slowly understanding what she was glaring at, he looked down at his shirt.
She slowly moved her gaze to the trash bin where he had dropped the ABBA shirt.
“Ahc, actually, it’s nothing much… just like that…” he tried his best, shrugging his shoulders.
“You know…” she interrupted, her voice surprisingly calm and cool. “You don’t really have to explain anything to me.. after all, we just are strangers who met in a lift…”
P.S.: I think I definitely have to continue this! :P
We’re On a Break!
4 years ago
25 comments:
loosu payyan! phone number vennum na, he cud have gone upto her and said "excuse me, can i have ur phone for a min.. it's an emergency and my cell conked off! :( "
and proceeded to dial his number from her cell :D
kadhai nalla irukaaa.. ora Twsit kanna twist... Tamil cinemavula edhavvadhu try panna pooreengalaa enaaa...
Haiyyo... part 2 ezhudhanumaa nu ketta... ipdi oru twist koduthu sodhappittaye, or nalla start aana romance story-a!! ;)
no.. jus kidding.. unexpected twist in tale :D
nice, continue pannunga..
lol@harish's comment :)))))
oh god... it looks like some mega serial.. cant wait for the next post kinda .. what happens next? haha.. that loosu madayan cud have thrown the ABBA shirt in the trash after gng home.. what a loser.. Dont tell me she somehow starts liking him and all.. I will go mad then hahhaa..
Hmm...I liked the fist installment,but this got just a tad unrealistic for me :P
Strangers in a lift-3
while drinking a cold coffee, it splits over the ABBA shirt.
( Aanna namma ammani asusal tamil film heroine mathiri munna pinna pakkatha ( STRANGERS in lift ) manushan namma phone no. vaanga thaan ABBA shirt p0ttu vanthatha nenaichutanga.. asusual over nenaputhan :))
< Really, nice one and expecting more twists in the story. twist ellatha mega seriala ?! >
yaar...u really blew me off...
i thought u were going to come up with some superb romantic twist...and u threw my expectations from the top of the eiffel tower...
chalo..but i loved ur title..sema cute
Thappi thavari sequel-nnu solliten - adhukkaga ipdiyaa?! nalla cute-aa oru romance story with a lived-happily-EVEN-after kind of ending irukkumnu me expected. But idhuvum nallave irukku - different! :-) **pats on the back** Keep it up ma!
Do I dare ask if there is a next in the series? ;-)
Twist ellam nalla than iruku.. ana ore oru logic than edikudhu.. how did he knew that she likes ABBA and prepared a T-shirt? he could have known that in advance, but he definitely is not a stranger then.. ?
anyways, continue writing and keep it up.. ;-)
harish,
i told you why it wouldn't work out... ;)
and i ask again, enna, experience-a? :)
neighbour,
insult! hmph!!
aravind,
i HATE candy floss romance stories!
i have no clue how to make this proceed ;)
vijay,
thanks!
vivhyd,
@@what a loser.
i know!!! :)
have no idea how to proceed with this, let's see...
pyromaniac,
sigh, i don't like this much myself!
lok,
stop calling my story a mega serial! X(
harish,
should everything in life be nice and rosy!
priya,
yup, ended this one saying it has to be continued! :)
venkatesh,
oh man, wait for the next one!
romba anubavichu ezhuthara maadhiri irukkae :D
magix,
nee manmatha rasa-nu again provings da! :)
kept we guys on suspense .. LOL :)
Arun A.S
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he he... THANKU SOOOOOOOO MUCH 4 ur wishes... Kadhai semma twist!!! really unexpected. oru Saki range-la pora... hmmm! Kalakku!!! :D
FCUK .....Forum for Chennai's Velailatha Katchi .....hehe numba ooru ala?
Woah!! Romantic fiction? Join da club! Hard ain't it? Harder when sequels are expected! Keep going... chale chalo!
prav,
poda!
btw, manmatha magix lol!!! :)
arun a s,
welcome! :)
sandhya,
welcome, dear...glad you had a lovely day! :)
mark,
hehe,yeah yeah!!
ramya,
whew...thank god, you said 'fiction'....fiction, people, fiction!! :D
hard, i know....am really stumped as to how to continue this! :(
"aBBa abba" atlast enna aachu... ethaavathu serial director chance kidachuthaaa!!!!
atleast vilambaram direct panna vaavadhu chance!!!!
waste payan... naangellam....naisa kitta pooi...ava baglerunthu phone-a suttutu....excuse me...u dropped this-nu koduppom !...appadiye build up panna vendiyathu thaan !!
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